Sunday, April 15, 2012

Entropy Remains

There is no word "forgotten"
in the language love has taught
I could last forever,
in the moment i had thought

A shape devoid of corners
a perfect world we made
Beauty..without a border
melodic serenade

I welcomed each tomorrow -
first step of a child
To all those around me
i opened up. and smiled

A perfect world surrounded us
coloured out the grays
A time when soft embraces
whittled me like clay

Hypnotic waves, footprinted sand,
all these i have known
But nothing matched the siren song
my bared heart was shown

I would last forever -
in the moment you embraced
And oh, i'd give a thousand suns
not to have been erased

 

1 comment:

  1. A time when soft embraces whittled me like clay...

    that is a beautiful line, and I can understand the part about giving away a thousand suns, good poem!

    Wander

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thank you so much for your thoughts and suggestions. i guess i provoked an emotion.